I still feel alone
this is my first poem ever
i still feel alone
in the loudest crowd.
It doesn’t matter where I am,
whether it’s quiet or loud.
I still feel alone
in a room full of noise,
yet I never step out of the room,
even though I have the choice.
I still feel alone
even in the brightest places.
It feels strange, because
I’m surrounded by familiar faces.
I still feel alone
when the world pulls me close,
when laughter surrounds me,
even in the arms of people who know me the most.
I still feel alone,
fighting this quiet fear,
watching the ones I love
slip through my fingers—
holding on tighter, tighter,
just to keep them near.
i love the introspective-ness of it all. Considering this is your first poem, it's really outstanding with room for improvement. Keep on writing :))))
In the loudest crowd is when we feel more alone.